Tuesday, January 10, 2012



For Student Pressure


In a rapidly growing society like our own, it is difficult to prosper, and many students are under severe pressure to do well.  This pressure is a good thing and the competition has made America what it is today.  If we didn’t have enough pressure on students, our technology would not increase, Britain would take us over, and we would all be enslaved.  Everyone is being pressured, it is just a part of life.  Anyone with half a brain says that student pressure is good for our society.  I am currently a student and this pressure has caused me to write such a well written argument.
            The more pressure you have on something, the more strength it requires, and the more pressure we put on students, the more strength they will have.  Congressman Trian Burnbaugh approves of student pressure because of the boundless benefits it has on us.  There was not enough student pressure back in the 1940’s and World War 2 began.  If we do not keep up the pressure, history will repeat itself and many lives will be carelessly lost.  Everyone who is not pressured to do well in school fails.  If you cannot do well in school, then you cannot do well in life.
            Why even worry about the pressure students have to do well when there are too many 

people in a classroom?  With all these students in a classroom, there is not enough time for one

on one instruction.  Without student pressure we shouldn’t even have schools.  Student pressure

is obviously good because of the benefits it provides, and we cannot spare to end this simply 

because some people do not want to try hard on their homework.

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